Wednesday, 22 October 2014

Studio Brief 1: YCN, Secret 7, Spice UK and other individual commissions

Competition Briefs

I have signed up to YCN and D&AD however I find D&AD quite confusing as a website to browse the competitions.

YCN Competitions I am interested in:


Save the children making fathers read to children - http://www.ycn.org/awards/ycn-student-awards/2014-15-ycn-student-awards/briefs/save-the-children I just thought this was a really nice idea for a brief and something that was quite open to play around with. I am quite passionate about children reading and learning I have a niece and nephew of whom I read to and do homework with. I think it's culturally known that women are the ones that read to children and this is something that does need to change and a responsibility of fathers too.


Yorkshire Tea appealing to youngsters - http://www.ycn.org/awards/ycn-student-awards/2014-15-ycn-student-awards/briefs/yorkshire-tea Me and my friend are a huge fan of Yorkshire tea and just tea in general and we came across the realisation of how sad it is when you forget someone has made you a cup of tea. If you leave a cup of tea on a surface that is out of sight and it goes cold, you get that sinking feeling inside. We call this a 'periferal' brew, a brew that is not in your direct view. I would maybe do something to illustrate this, making it humorous.


Interflora's Grandparents day  - http://www.ycn.org/awards/ycn-student-awards/2014-15-ycn-student-awards/briefs/interflora I was thinking if this has to appeal to the younger generation of doing something visually humorous to catch their attention. Maybe like a grandma holding up her fingers doing a rock sign, but with flowers coming out of the end of her fingers? I love the idea of this brief because I really do respect my elders and I think we take them for granted. One thing that I remind people about is that we are our grandparents life, when they go home they may not have anyone to talk to whereas we can always talk to our friends or family. So this brief is something I would invest my passion into and I know I could put a humorous spin on it to appeal to youngsters. However, I am not sure my style would suit the brand?

Private Commissions

I often get asked if I will create portraits for people and I have turned them down until now. Now I feel it fits in with my degree and I have the confidence to do it I have begun to accept. I created a tumblr account with all of my work to show people. I also created a new instagram account AMPillustrations which is purely my illustration work. I got messages from doing this; and have created my first portrait. Sold for £40. I advertised them as an 'original idea for a christmas present.'


I also got asked for a copy of an earlier print from last year of overweight disney princesses. I reworked the print and advertised it on social medias for sale and had a few more offers to buy it. I then thought of an idea to do portraits of people but making them fatter as a humorous gift for Christmas. I advertised that I would be thinking of doing this if people were interested and had a few responses for that too. 


I was then driving to work and had a brainwave. I work for TGI Fridays and when we place our bills down for customers we have blank tip trays that we are supposed to decorate with our names saying thank you on them. I asked my manager if I would be able to decorate one with my illustrations and place my website along the bottom. I did not know whether advertising this would be against company policy but he agreed to let me do it as long as the illustrations weren't offensive. This is great because it gets people looking at my work from all age ranges and social groups. 



Also I visited the apple store for a technical fault with my phone, but whilst I was waiting I brought up my website on a couple of the laptops laying around and left them up for people to browse through - cheeky!

TGI Fridays

TGI Friday's managers asked me to draw out their badges that they wear on their uniform as part of their company passions and incentives. They had a team challenge coming up against all the stores in the UK and wanted to create a book for the inspector to see full of things they have achieved over the year and how the team members worked well together. I came up with these really simple designs from reference of their badges.






Really quick and simple and not happy with them at all but that's the feel they were going for just something fun and they were over the moon with the outcomes. They printed each motif a few times on each page of their book. 

Fat Portraits
I posted on social media a chance for people to recieve some of my overweight portraits whereby people send in an image of someone they wish to have a laugh with by adding a little bit of extra weight to them and got asked for a few of these as private commissions so this is something I have been working on. I have had a lot of requests for digital portraits as christmas presents. I think this is a really good idea and definitely a time I should be making the most of these as birthdays don't come around so often.
Here is a sketch of a fat portrait I am working on :

Finished image : This was sold for £30


Posting my work on Tumblr and Instagram has been really successful for me because people are getting in touch with me from all over by word of mouth. I have been asked by one guy if I will print 4 x A1 copies of any of my work for his skate shop. He wants to fill the entrance corridor with 'cool' illustrations. This meant I've had to go back into my work and really zoom in on them making sure there are absolutely no gaps in the colouring to ensure they'll look okay at A1. 

I was also approached to get involved in a charity fundraising scheme for EDS disease. A local girl of 12 years old is suffering from the disease and trying to raise money for bed lifts, and bath lifts that they have not received funding for. I said that I was more than happy to get involved free of charge as they promised to promote my work on social media sites and anywhere else they could. I think it is very humbling that people are getting in touch for a good cause. 


YCN Brief

I have chosen the Yorkshire Tea brief as my favourite possible YCN brief to explore because I feel they understand what kind of outcome they want more; but are still open for you to run with. They are more focused on what particular audience they want to communicate to. They feel they are not appealing enough to youngsters 18-35. This is obviously ideal because I am a tea drinker of this age and know what people look for. I think I would have to put a humorous spin to it and maybe go more down the design route of a new way of drinking tea. I think this would engage with youngsters more than packaging would. People tend to follow trends more, if this new way of drinking was 'trending' it would be highlighted and therefore used more.

I would be happy to work on this for the next few months because I think it would be quite fun and good to research into. I think the marketing of the product is important and at the minute we do see Yorkshire Tea around but it is quite expensive and so students and youngsters tend to go for the cheapest option. I noticed Yorkshire Tea handing out the portable drinks cups and free teabags in a train station naming it 'Yorkshire Tea day' which I thought was pretty clever. They could do more of this but giving out more of an eye-catching drinks holder where you don't 'forget about it.' Yorkshire Tea is in my eyes, the nicest teabag! I think a new way of drinking would add a fun factor to drinking the tea and set a trend. I was thinking something along the lines of a new mug design, advert idea or package design to highlight how tea's can be left to get cold if you forget about them. I think especially over the winter this would be a great idea to characterise the teabag into not being left unseen to go cold. It could be called 'the periferol brew' rather than peripheral view - a brew that is out of sight that get's left to die out. Peripheral vs Proper. Take tetley for instance, they use character and celebrities in their adverts. Nothing to do with the packaging of the product, but catches your attention.

1) What is the problem?
The problem is tea is not dominant between the 18-35 age range. 55+ are the strong advocates for Yorkshire tea.
2) What is it asking you to do?
Design something that will engage and benefit young customers. Can be packaging/format idea, a new way to drink tea, something that adds to the tea drinking experience, how consumers love a 'proper brew.' The 'proper brew' notion needs to be echoed still.
3) What will you achieve?
Winning a competition brief for a well known brand.
4) Who will benefit?
They will benefit from the idea which is the only downfall. If you come up with a really good idea over simple tweaks to the packaging then you would be a lot more disheartened at the end of it. They will be using my ideas for their product. I will however benefit once again winning a compeition for a brand so well known and my designs be possibly used in all supermarkets or on all packaging etc.
5) Audience?
18-35 year olds.
6) What are you communicating?
How it is not just the over 50 year old's that love a good brew, brews are for everyone.
7) How will the concept/idea be delivered?
The output is product innovation, a creative product idea. Have to explore packaging, format, occasion and usage. It will be delivered digitally 11:59pm 19th March 2015. Can be delivered individually or as a team.

Seminar














Yorkshire Tea

1)Why have I chosen it
2) What do I want to get out of it
3) What I need to produce in response
4) What do I want to produce

1) First off I chose it because it was a brand I was famillar with. One that was popular enough to be researched into well. I love tea so I'd be passionate about the product. It seemed pretty open to play. It was aimed at an age range I felt comfortable I could work with. If I won I'd be proud to say I won to such a succesfull company.

2) Ideally I'd love my design and idea to work. I'd love recognition from them as a company. Perhaps be offered a placement and it would just be nice for such a large company to recognise my talents. I want to win! I'd like to see my designs used in supermarkets on a larger scale, billboards, advertisement etc  but not abuse my ideas and just steal them.

3) Need to create a new product innovation. A creative product idea, be it packaging, format, a new way to drink tea. Something that adds to the tea drinking experience

4) I want to produce an idea for a new way of drinking. I think I would use character design as the focus point to get the concept across. A storyline about how tea can be left to go cold if forgotten about. Maybe characterise/personify the teabag walking around out in the snow forgotten about by passers by. In the Yorkshire dales or something to keep it central to Yorkshire. Based on the idea of a 'Peripheral Brew' A brew that is out of sight that you put on the side table and forget about. Something fun and playful to target a younger audience. Captures the hearts of the nation, and still based on a 'proper brew' notion. Have a proper brew, not a peripheral brew. If you look at tetley, they characterised theirs with the monkey, and used a celebrity for the advert. Maybe have 'Peripheral Brew' trying to add people as a friend request on facebook and it getting denied so he's sat there sad with no friends. The mugs could have him on them waving as if to say don't forget about me. Make the most of your brew. Narration over the advertisement talking about how we know you all have busy lives, but don't forget to take the time to have a brew. A proper brew's for life, not just for winter. Maybe a busy mum picks it up and he starts to smile and goes to cuddle her then she puts him down cause the baby has spilt something and he's left on the side again. May be a lad coming home from football about to drink and has to put it down cause someones shouted him to play the xbox. A nana about to drink and puts it down cause shes forgot to record Eastenders... etc etc

1)Who is the audience?

18-35 year olds

2) Who should the audience be?

Any age range that drinks tea, the whole british nation

3) Who could the audience be?

Any one old enough to drink tea, the british nation

4) Why?

Just because it's called Yorkshire tea doesn't mean its souly for the people of Yorkshire. It can be for anyone willing to spend the retail price for it. Both male and female, men and women. They are lucky that their audience is so open and up for play. It can be more than just 35 year olds, it needs to stretch to the very elderly as it applies to everyone. I think 18 year old is fair enough because anyone younger than this maybe shouldn't be encouraged to drink caffiene.

5) What do they do the audience? Everyday life and routine?
Everyday people of Britain. At work, on their lunch hour, at a desk, students, people at home, out walking their pets with a flask, chilling watching television, out in a cafe, a restaurant, at a hotel, having their breakfast, trying to wake themselves up on a morning, trying to warm themselves up in the winter, having a bath with a cup of tea on the side, reading a book. Literally anyone who drinks tea doing their day to day routine.

6) Where do they go?

  • home
  • bedroom
  • pub
  • restaurant
  • cafe
  • hotel
  • afternoon tea 
  • at a friends
  • at a family members
  • walking around with a flask
  • university
  • school
  • work
  • anywhere that sells tea
  • a stall

7) What do they buy?
  • Food in a restaurant
  • food in a cafe
  • cakes
  • their grocery shopping


8) What do they want to be?
  • normal - they are the people of Britain. 


Complete project proposal form - specifics. Contextual references of initial ideas - What's already out there, to give some sense of what's in our head. Inital scamps/thumbnails.

Bit more research into Yorkshire Tea

I always thought the reason Yorkshire Tea may not be as popular as tetleys and pg was because it was too expensive. However, after looking at the retail prices it is actually cheaper, if not on par.

Retail Price comparrisons

250g pack of 80 teabags

Tesco
Yorkshire Tea : £200
PG Tips : £2.45
Tetley : £2.29
Typhoo : £1.50
Twinings : £3.49


Morrisons
Yorkshire Tea : £2.50
PG tips: £2.49
Tetley : £2.29
Typhoo : £2.19
Twinings : £3.49

Asda
Yorkshire Tea : £2.00
PG Tips : £2.29
Tetley : £2.00
Typhoo : £1.50
Twinings : £2,00

So if it's not the price being too much, why isn't Yorkshire Tea as popular? Maybe because we don't see it advertised enough?
I decided to compare how they advertise to other popular tea brands.

Yorkshire Tea advertisement

1996
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=24N7GMk2Byo

2007
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9_4WY9IgXIs

2011
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5QuBM_t_Tjw


2013

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wVjiGWUhHnw

2014
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wq-JxQ0cwMA

The whole Yorkshire countryside theme is nice, but it's quite boring. If you want to aim at youngsters you have to be relevant and also capture their emotions whether that be through humour or a sympathy vote.


PG tips


Monkey

This monkey became the mascot of PG. The monkey family, nothing to do with tea, but became so famous and recognisable that they ran with it, and are still using the monkey notion today. For PG it was all about the humor and entertainment factor, as they later started to use one of Britains comedians Johnny Vegas.







1971
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HgzEBLa3PPk

1992
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jk93JYTzhTk
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kmmE_h60rjk

2000
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E2mA-S0kR98

2008 the introduction of johnny vegas
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q4IahEqXF_o

2011
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KeyjN4NVNhI

Tetley Tea






Tetley again have their mascot and I feel this is what Yorkshire Tea could be missing. Put 'chuffin' kettle on - they speak down to earth, 'folk' with slang of Britain. They are the people of Britain. If I made a mascot it would have to be an average person that could relate to everyone.

1989 - Tetley revolution. When all teabags were square Tetley was the only teabag to be round
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g1gUxFXqcG8

2014 - Bringing 'folk' together. Still using their orginial characters in animation with futuristic vibe.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CjNeAxTGVCM
 I think this idea of bringing together is succesful in advertising. As if nothing sorts conflict like a good cup of tea.
If you look at the Sainsburys ad, the idea of world peace, it has been probably the biggest ad this year.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NWF2JBb1bvM

This could be an idea for Yorkshire. Saying despite how busy you are, come together and have a proper brew. Showing all ages in their busy lifestyles. The character follows different groups trying to get their attention but they're too busy, they forget about him. He goes cold.. and the message stands, don't forget to have a proper brew, before it goes cold. Or they could be two seperate messages. It could be the mascot follows all members of one family, and their busy lifestyle. For example
  •  Camera follows teenager to college, hes laughing with his mates and pulls out his phone, sees that the mascot has sent him a friend request on facebook - presses not now
  • Shows the teabag at a football game everyone cheering and hugging eachother and he cheers but everyone just turns their back to him
  • Camera follows Dad to work showing him putting his shoes on so the mascot rushes to put his shoes on and go with him, but dad slams the front door and hes left looking out the window pressing the glass
  • Teabag joins a group of 25 year old girls in a restaurant for a girly chat and they all burst out laughing and the tea bag does a delayed laugh slapping the table and they all just look at it like its weird and look anyway like 'anywayyyy'
  • Camera follows Mum around in the kitchen whilst she feeds the baby and she drops something so he picks it up and goes to hand it to her but someone shouts her upstairs and she walks away. 
  • Camera shows the mascot walking down a busy street in the snow waving to stop people as they rush by with their briefcases on their phones but everyone just passing him by.
  • Camera shows him looking in on a family home through the window 
Then the message says, no matter how busy you are, don't forget to have a proper brew. 
  • Camera shows grandma bringing in a tray of tea for the family as they take a sip and grandad puts his hand on the mascots shoulder and takes his hand, inviting him inside.
This way it involves all age ranges, and sort of mocking the fact people think brew's are just for the elderly. It also brings the idea of Yorkshire to the busy streets of everywhere else in the UK as well. The idea that 'We'll bring Yorkshire to you' the peace and tranquility. 

Or the message could be :

"No matter how busy you are, don't let it go cold.
Yorkshire Tea - have a proper brew."

The Mascot

How do you personify a teabag? Does it have to look like a teabag? Could it be an animal? Could it be like a little borrower that goes unnoticed? Is it a ghost? Why is it so invisible that it's getting ignored?





I then looked into teabag character design and I came across this which could be an amazing idea.. if the mascot could feature on the teabag pull strings as well as disposable cups. That way, you can't forget about it.


On the teabag itself




Disposable cups


The design can be on the cup itself :



Or those carboard rings around them to stop you burning your hands




That way you can include the character design and slogan.

Thinking outside the box
I started to look into teabag design, designs of the actual teabag itself and packaging.
They're quite graphic but there were some really nice ideas












I then looked into the character design. I would have to create a character that people felt sorry for. I started to look at square headed characters but I felt this was a little limited. I opted to just look at character design in general for sad characters. Their facial expressions and posture







Sad animation

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VLpF4WzdJiI

Getting ignored

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ss6LprjSKm0

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oaxnd6yqXhQ

Best animation so far :

This really inspired me and was just the feel I was going for. Something that really touches you. I like the idea of 3D animation as well. Makes it more realistic and heart felt

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O_yVo3YOfqQ

Thumbs



My Brief











Secret 7





Diana Ross and The Supremes - Reflections





  • Mirrors
  • Young and old
  • Heartache
  • Break ups
  • Other worldly
  • Reflections in windows 
  • Sadness
  • Mirrors inside a mind
  • Lonliness
  • Isolation
From reading into the lyrics I have an idea of an old woman stood looking in the mirror at herself and her partner happy in their earlier years but she is alone looking at it because he is now gone. Or looking out of the window at their earlier selves laughing and holding hands but she is alone. I get a sense that she has lost someone she once loved and was once really happy with and feels alone now. I want to show this sense of loss

Thumbnail of rough idea



Scanned in image ready to edit and colour



Development



I experimented with a few colour palettes changing the colour of their clothing often



I think this sums up looking at yourself in younger years. I need to make it look more like a mirror.. and maybe look more like the old lady is crying? Not sure, but it looks a little too happy at the minute. Maybe more of a shadow of where the man would be stood, but now he is gone?








7X7 inch dimension :
Had to extend the wallpaper along the left hand side to fit



Project Report




































Yorkshire Tea Progress Reviews




Final Yorkshire Tea designs












Yorkshire Tea Boards






Crit feedback

  • Brilliant ideas
  • Lovely head, love it
  • Don't leave one word on the bottom row, align to the left
  • Thinking about your problem contextually will show Yorkshire Tea that you thought about product
  • The text is too long across the page which made me get lost in the middle of reading them
  • Nice concept
  • Seems like a great animation
  • Cutting off your market by doing a winter theme
  • Beaut idea, love the teabag head. Don't think you need to explain what they've asked for though
  • Good idea suggesting a campaign
  • I love the idea, that bag is freaking creepy though
  • Love the teabag boy! Really cute idea. Helps the audience become attached to a character.
  • Great face reference


Submission to YCN















Project Report



















Spice UK Radio station

Quite possibly the most annoying commission I've ever done!

Spice UK are a Radio station aimed at creative teens who got in touch with me on Facebook and asked me if I could create an illustration to stand besides their logo on their website. They wanted something relevant to spice so asked for two peppers. They then wanted the peppers to be dressed cultural.

After showing them my first initial design they decided the peppers should be changed to being dressed fashionable and youth trendy.
They changed their mind after every image I showed them in terms of the hairstyles, hats, what the peppers were carrying etc.
This was extremely tedious and time consuming. Here are some screenshots of the continous change in the design























I then animated the feet tapping as they asked for. They even sent me a video of themselves tapping their feet to show how they wanted the image to move which I thought was pretty amusing.















All in all it look me two weeks after animating. Really fussy customer. I now understand what illustrators mean when they say you will get bad clients who change your idea a million times. It was so frustrating no matter how much I tried to persuade them to keep something the same or give them a better idea. I am not happy with the design or animation at all; but they were very pleased and that's all that counts I suppose. It's not something I would create myself. I also told them that they should get a graphic designer to change their logo for them to which they sent me an image and asked if I could change it and I declined. Not someone I wish to work with in the future. They paid me £50 which seems pretty good but I am not sure is worth it for the time I spent changing things around.

Presentation Board



Project Report





50th Birthday Portrait Commission


Again on social media I was requested to create a portrait for someones mother of her and her deceased mother for her 50th birthday. I am always a little bit cautious when doing portraits of people who have passed away because there is such a responsibility to get the likeness right and to create that emotion within your work that the clients are able to connect with, its a real pressure.
I wanted to make sure I got this spot on but still keep my own illustrative style of painting at the same time.
I spent 3 days on this piece and sold it for £30. The customer was extremely happy, her mother was in tears recieving the design and even went out of her way to buy me a card to thank me and a bottle of wine!
This was a really nice feeling to be able to give someone that memory back in a special way with a digital painting.


Dogtraits - Commissions for dog lovers

I created myself a challenge to do portraits of peoples animals so I posted this on Social media for a chance for the dog lovers out there to recieve a digital painting of their dogs and got a few responses back for it. Each sold at £15 A4 glossy






Presentation Board


The Deers

I had a request for an A2 scaled print of a deer of some sort for inside the home. I started to look at how I could incorporate deers into designs that would fit the household and be current. I looked at interior design and furniture stores for inspiration. I liked the idea of using an old book but could not find an image suitable to work with. I experimented with bibles, wood, leather, fabric and an atlas as backgrounds. I coloured over them and changed the opacities to my liking. My favourite was the atlas piece which I sold for £50. I then made smaller prints of the rest and sold them for £20 for a set of 6 at A5. People went crazy for them and I ended up having to make lots of prints of these. This was the most I had made off of commissions. People love deers!





Tuesday, 14 October 2014

Studio Brief 2 - Moving Pictures

Including fast, slow, off the page and metamorphosis. 

I chose to use hands because this still runs with my theme of Burrough's hands, they were to sway slowly from side to side then get hit by an arrow that moves fast, from an explosive firework that grew larger in scale and accompanied by a square that turned into a rectangle along the page. 

At first I found it difficult to get my head around, the idea that 12 frames only lasts one second. I think we over estimated how much we can fit into one second and maybe should have made it more simple. However it has give me a good idea of how to place things on the page and think about compositions. Animation is something that I feel will take a while to get my head around because I struggle to imagine how something should look or will look until I do it. I am also still coming to terms with repeating my drawings, I find repetition quite challenging.




I kind of want to keep it simple at the minute maybe a hand opening and closing or I liked the idea of the syringe in the video I watched by Valerie Pirson ' Pistache ' 
I love the aesthetic of these pieces and I think this is due to the materials used. Acetate seems a really good idea 



I like this messy ink aesthetic I think that would suit Burroughs and the themes within his work.

I took influence from the syringe with what looks like medication going down it to create my own and see how it turns out


I cut out the darker paper to be able to see this clearly under a light box, with different levels to show the 'heroin' travelling down it. I would like to experiment with acetate instead of the tracing paper and use inks splatting out the end of the syringe like Pirson did. I think this aesthetic would work better and compliment the concept of Burroughs more as it is messier. The materials I used here did not work as well.

When looking back over my work I had to come up with an idea for an animation that would tie into Burroughs, maybe use some motifs I'd previously looked at. From influence from Pistache with the syringe I got thinking about heroin travelling up veins in the arm or maybe using the hand as this was a motif I had explored quite a lot. I thought of a hand or arm with veins slowly appearing and then the veins either turning into a quote or having heroin run up the veins in a different colour. This would be a hand drawn animation. Another idea was to have a hand with heroin powder inside slowly tilting and the heroin pouring out, then forming something to do with death like maybe a skull or having little figures drowning in the powder. This would be something 3D I could generate myself maybe with talc or salt.

In order to move forward I need to experiment more with 3D animation and how different materials come across on camera.
Dragonframe & After Effects - Notes












After Effects screenshots















Animating Burroughs - hand generated animation ideas


I had an idea of maybe having heroin exploding out of the hands to carry on my motif but make for a more interesting animation.
I then thought for my final animation I could expand on this by drawing the hand moving to the side and then combining physical objects such as talt or talc to pour out of the hands and have hand drawn figures within them.



Combining text : I was thinking of an interesting way to combine text into my drawings; maybe with a quote or just words associated.





I made thumbnails of ideas for my drawn animation there are only 35 here but I guessed that most of these would take up more than one slide and take longer to generate but this is a general idea of what I want to achieve. A hand growing, with veins growing up the arm into the hand. A coloured heroin will then travel up the veins I am thinking possibly a dark yellow colour. The hand then closes and re-opens with the heroin exploding out. I could turn the heroin into text but I am just going to see how I get on I don't want to over complicate it at this stage. I chose the hand arm and veins as this sticks with my motifs that I earlier explored. 


Hand drawn animation test drawings :

I tested out using the peg bar and how I was going to compose my images by just doing 7 quick frames













After effects lesson 2 - Screenshots


Generating solid layers



Safe zones


Using images from Photoshop - Transparent background



Cropping




Creating an animation from images layered in


Here I added the cloud background and made it move across the screen by using the position key. I then layered a mountain on top and sunflower and played around with the scale of the mountain getting larger and the sunflower opacity making it disappear. I added more layers of the balloons and played around with their position making them fly and dip by moving the anchor point. I used the rotation button to rotate the finishing point angle of one of the balloons to make it look like it was crashing down.












Notes












Dragonframe experimentation :















Background

I incorporated this grainy background to compliment the aesthetic of the piece




Animation on After Effects



Peer review

This gave me a better understanding of a direction to go with the animation. The guys agreed that the work best suited my concept and the aesthetic worked well. They agreed with me that next time I could use acetate and ink. I am thinking of having ink coming out of the bottom of the syringe and people drowning in the ink to show heroin taking over peoples lives. 

Reference of my hands I used for my animation


















After Effects workshop

Hand drawn animation :

With my hand drawn animation I have experienced a couple of problems when opening it into After Effects. Photographing it in Dragon frame was easy and I actually really enjoyed the experience, playing it back and finally seeing things come together. However with After Effects it hasn't came across quite how I imagined.  I asked the technician to sit down with me and help to edit some of the things I was unhappy with. For example I drew my images out portrait and needed to rotate the whole animation landscape. I also noticed my images had crop marks showing up within them and the colour was quite grey in the background. I played around with the scale of the piece zooming in on the text in areas and slowing down the pace. In order to slow certain areas of the animation and speed up others I split them into different sections. This meant the hand would appear pretty slow growing, with veins then appearing pretty fast and veins flipping out exploding from the hands. However the text needs to be read pretty slow in order for you to understand what it says so I slowed that part down.

So it's a working progress for me so far, I've edited the images in Photoshop playing with the levels and brightness to make them whiter, and erased all crop marks along with any other unwanted marks.
I've also found that I can't upload the video to my blog, so I made a vimeo account - this also failed.




So here are screenshots of my animation:











































Editing the background also means I will be able to rotate the sequence portrait and it work as a landscape piece.

After effects workshop

We had another workshop learning more about how the images can move along the page with motion blur and auto orient meaning our images move along a path more realistically. I thought this was really useful because it makes it flow better. Another useful thing was the Adjustment layer whereby You can apply your effects to all layers. This is something I could have done with my animation rather than doing it in Photoshop!


For my animation I also need to decide on what kind of sound I would like to add. I was thinking of an interview with Burroughs but I don't know if this would be too obvious. I then looked to see if there was any music that had been made already that incorporated his voice. There were, but they did not suit the mood. I want something quite creepy. I was looking at drug music and they all seem to be dance tunes really upbeat. I then looked at more horror style music and came across some creepy music box stuff that I think would maybe suit it better.



Contextual References

Animation

Alan Baker

Collaging photography

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vXbKlT6PWPU



Katharine Asher

Hand generated

These seemed more realistic to what I could achieve, pretty basic but lovely concept of santa throwing beers to all the different countries. Included text too 


Sebastian Iwohn

More of a digital approach


Experimentation of media

Here I tried out acetate and ink as a way of pro ducting the syringe and heroin entering the animation rather than paper as I'd tried out previously. This will show up better in photographs. I need to use a different pen to draw the syringe onto the acetate as the one I used was a medium and was far too thick.
I then tried to look at different ways I could show figures drowning, this was just a really rough idea (stick men - the shame) but i was just getting an idea of whether the ink would be enough coverage over the pen (it wasn't)






I added a little bit of black to the yellow ink as I felt it was far too vibrant before




Backgrounds to be scanned to perhaps use in the animation

Reference imagery that helped me visualise how I want the heroin to pour out of the hands and how I could show people drowning in it


Thumbs of how I want the animation to pan out 





PLAN OF WHAT I NEED TO DO NEXT :






I have looked into how channels advertise documentaries as my animation is based on a documentary of the life of Burroughs.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7PFRIGx69bw



I was thinking of ways I could encorporate text and obviously I will need to add the name of the documentary and when it will be aired. I think I will start with a quote from him, animation and then the name of the documentary, channel date and time at the end. This will be animated showing my hand writing it out as my handwriting will be styled to reflect burroughs.



Writing like a junkie or writing like burroughs?

Ive had a lot of consideration over the text I want to use. I know I want to do something hand generated because I feel I am capable of pulling this off succesfully. I've always been known for having nice handwiritng, and I can forge other peoples handwriting quite easily so I'd like to give it a go. The way I have been exploring it I feel reflects that of a diary entry kind of feel. I exaggerate all highs and lows such as l's and y's to make it quite scratchy, narrow and thin. I think this supports the aesthetic of the piece. However when I researched burroughs handwriting it's quite small and more broad. If you imagine the handwriting I've been doing looks portrait, burroughs would be landscape.
So I am unsure which to go with, my own take or mimic his?





After my peer review I really had a think about my advice given that maybe it doesn't reflect Burroughs enough. This is a documentary based on Burroughs life, and I feel right now my printed pictures are saying more about that than my animation will. I am hoping that the sound I use and the quotes will reflect him more. Also the fact that I am writing the quotes out and animating the pen writing reflects him being a writer. Maybe using his handwriting will be a good idea.

A BIG CHANGE

I decided I needed to make a change. The feedback given to me about the quote coming out of the hand they felt didn't really make sense and was a little irrelevant. It would also be far too complicated to turn a quote into the yellow ink pouring down because I'd have to write the quote out in ink and I don't think that will come across very well.
After looking into more quotes from Burroughs I came across a lovely one including a centipede and it triggered off some thoughts. Centipedes are a theme in his book and may make the animation a little creepier. I started to thumb some ideas




I will create a centipede from the veins that explode from the hands. The frame will then shift to just the head of the centipede and it's antennas. They will close together to form one single antenna that then thickens out and forms the pouring of the ink into a pool.

(add more thumbs)

This makes more sense I think and will be easier to do because the veins will already be in yellow ink, and the centipede could be yellow, and the heroin pool will be yellow ink also. Rather than swapping my medias around.

This is the sequence in bullet form. After thumbnailing I am up to 100 frames so far :
  • hand holding pen enters screen
  • pen starts to write
  • writes out a quote
  • quote lasts approx 15 slides depending on how many words 
  • one frame of the whole of the quote together
  • quote fades out in 3 slides
  • hand drawn hand appears
  • 6 slides it takes for the hand to be drawn out
  • syringe appears top right corner
  • takes 4 slides to enter and pierces the vein in arm
  • takes 4 slides to leave as the hand jerks backwards
  • 3 slides of veins growing out
  • zooms in on to the veins only
  • veins turn into centipede legs
  • centipede body grows from left to right
  • takes 10 slides to grow 
  • zooms in on the antennas on the head of centipede
  • they close together in 7 frames 
  • they form just one antenna
  • the antenna thickens out
  • it shifts to the top left hand corner 
  • yellow ink forms a pouring motion
  • pours out a pool that fills 3/4 of the frame
  • bubbles appear in the water 
  • hands start to emerge as if drowning
  • sink back into the water and bubbles appear again
  • water is still and fills up the frame in 3 slides
  • hand appears back on to the screen 
  • writes out the name of the documentary, time date and channel 
Questions to ask ahead of my progress tutorial 
  1. How can I cheat? How can I make life a bit easier for myself? Cut some corners?
  2. What font of text should I use?
  3. Am I over-complicating it?
  4. Does it reflect Burroughs enough?
  5. Will red and black ink look okay for the printed pictures?
PLAN OF WHAT TO DO NEXT:
  • Need to look into what sound I want to use
  • Decide on a quote and font - see how many frames it will take up
  • Draw out exact amount of frames
  • Do a test piece of writing out the quote as one single animation
  • Turn veins into centipede. Centipede into pool - more experimentation of this
  • Experiment collaging the hands appearing drowning rather than drawing them out as it may save time
  • Decide on a background for all frames - needs to be closest to the yellow colour

Sound Exploration

Need to pick a youtube/vimeo clip, convert to mp3. Upload file into After effects and drag into the sequence. Can fade music in and out. Have layers of two sounds at once


Olay Line - Suzanne Deakin 

The music here seems to suit the movement of the line with the high and low pitch, the pace changes. I don't know if this was done purposely or just seemed to fit by chance but it certainly made me think of how I could match music to the movement of my piece. Maybe speed up/slow down the pace of certain areas of my animation to match the sound. 




Matthew Young - Money


Here Matthew uses speech over his animation, which gave me the idea of using maybe an interview with Burroughs or a reading of his novel. However, a reading of his novel doesn't say much about his life so I need to chose something that reflects him as a person. 


https://vimeo.com/70249693


Reading from the threepenny opera - what keeps mankind alive?

His dull tone over a quite playful tune. A playful tune might be quite creepy 

https://vimeo.com/38374080

Oliver Jeffers

I looked at him when thinking about handwriting the text, myself illustration through text. 



I like how he has crossed words out and included the mistakes, I might use this for showing Burrough's writing, just to mix it up a little bit and show an erratic state of mind. Rushing, with thoughts too fast to get down on paper correctly.


I love this video for Naked Lunch as it includes a reading of the novel from Burroughs but also other sounds overlapping such as music and sounds made by females. The video itself is really dark and has a combination of layers and movements, a really nice aesthetic. 

I like this text for Burroughs also as it looks like a diary entry kind of feel. The white on black background looks nice too. 


Progress Tutorial

After showing Eleanor my thumbs for my animation I asked her how I could cut it down, make it less complicated and not have to draw everything by hand. In my test animation it took 40 frames to draw out the hand and veins and took a few days to create. That would just be one little part of my plan for this animation so I felt it was far too complicated.

Eleanor asked me which parts of the animation thumbs were my favourite. I decided I may cut out the hand animation completely; starting with the veins exploding into legs.
Eleanor really liked the idea of me animating myself writing as if I were Burroughs.We decided on this being the main focus of the animation, fading in and out.
She also said that it could be a journey of the text turning into a line that turns into a drawing and so on.
I am going to include both speech from Burroughs and music as my sounds, and play a few at one time to make it more mysterious. Overall I will concentrate on putting the animation together and the mood and tone rather than lots of lovely drawings that take forever to do.

Inital ideas now go as follows:

  • Hand comes in to animate quote - shortest quote possible
  • quote runs on a line
  • line turns into veins
  • veins create centipede legs
  • centipede grows
  • antennas form one line
  • line runs on
  • creates another quote
  • line creates syringe then runs on
  • creates the time channel title of show

    meanwhile sound runs throughout and backgrounds change fading in and out
Practicing Burroughs handwriting 


Shorter quotes 

I need to pick one of these for the beginning of my animation that sums up Burroughs and which would suit a documentary based on his life:
  • I am getting so far out one day I won't come back at all
  • Silence is only frightening to people who are compulsively verbalizing
  • Nothing is true, everything is permitted
  • How I hate those who are dedicated to producing conformity
  • Junk is the ideal product. The ultimate merchandise
  • Hustlers of the world : There is one mark you cannot beat, the mark inside
  • Which came first the intestine or the tapeworm?
  • You must learn to live alone in silence
  • The face of evil is always the face of total need
  • Kill the bitch and write a book. That's what I did
Sound clips

I will use sound throughout the whole of the animation. 30 seconds long. I will also try to layer over some creepy music if it fits.
I am looking at interviews or clips of Burroughs talking as it could act as part of the documentary, as if what he is saying will be included within the documentary.

I like this one about dreams because it seems irrelevant and out there, making you wonder what the documentary will entail. Previously visited in earlier research and translated within my motif work; Burroughs speaks of dreams

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t_4KJkqmIBY

I need to turn this into MP3 and add to after effects. I will use the basic background of clouds moving that the technicicans set up for us in our workshop just as a tester of how to use sound. Cloud and dreams will mesh well.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KMbx1f43Y9A

I like the part ' is everybody in, the ceremony's about to begin' but I think the sound in the background is far too upbeat and I've tried searching for just him speaking that part but couldn't find it.

Pen dilemmas
So Eleanor told me to think about what kind of pen Burroughs would use I went out and bought an expensive fountain pen only to realise I'd bought blue ink for it! When I needed black.. I had a play around with it anyway but I think I might use a black sharpie


















Figuring out how many frames it will take me to write. This is 18 but I took away about 7 that were blurry as it's hard to photograph and write at the same time hence why I need a Dragonframe buddy with me when I come to animate. My hand does look really old though which fits!
















Adding sound

I tried to convert the 'dreams' video to MP3 on http://www.youtube-mp3.org/ but it was blocked for it's content. I then tried 'Is everybody in' video and that worked. I played it and decided the section I would use was from 50 seconds to 1 minute 25. This includes screams and his speech as well as music. Also cant quite figure out how to add the music to the after effects file need to ask about this

I finally got the dreams soundclip to convert to mp3


New thumbnailed plan
  • Hand enters the screen drawing out a quote
  • The quote reads ' Kill the bitch and write a book... that's what I did ' 
  • The quote turns into a line
  • The line turns into a centipede
  • The antennas of the centipede turns back into a line
  • The line spells out a word 
  • The frame zooms out and the word is surrounded by other words that are part of another quote 
  • The quote gets cut up by the hand 
  • Zooms in to one word that's been cut out
  • Word turns into a line
  • Line forms the information of the date, time, channel of the show





Centipede
I tried to erase some of the centipede to show a progression of the centipede growing

Putting the centipede into After Effects



Experimenting writing digitally




In order to show the growth of the writing appearing I had to write it all out then erase word for word starting at the end and screenshot as I went along. The screenshots saved backwards so I then had to open them up into Photoshop.




I then had to rename each file. I numbered them 1- onwards so that they would then appear in order and opened them up in after effects. I did the same with the centipede drawing in order to show the centipede growing (as above).




I had to slow this down quite a lot as it was too fast so I changed the frame rate to 10 frames per second on this one.

This is the result - Centipede growing


I then decided to experiment drawing the line growing from the antennas of the centipede. Again with the same technique of erasing from back to front and renaming the files in order.



This seems a good idea and simpler than doing by hand but I feel there must be an easier way to do it than erasing and screenshotting each frame. I am going to ask for more help with this.


I had a go at animating this in After Effects



I spoke with someone in class and asked how they were going about their digital animation and they gave me a really good idea. I knew there must be a simpler way than what I was going about it!
  • Open Photoshop and start file as film and video. 
  • Then in size click PAL widescreen square pixel. 
  • Drag away the blue lines from the frame 
  • Window - Timeline
  • Bottom of screen - create new timeline
  • Click three squares in bottom left
  • Add new layers 
  • Can change the opacity of the last layer to onion skin it 
  • Create animation and file - export - render
  • Saves as an MP4

    This is so much more helpful as I can create the animation in photoshop rather than drag them into after effects
Thumbnailing final idea for animation using this method:




When I came to do this myself, every time I added a new year it was a duplicate layer so whatever I drew, appeared on every frame which I didn't want. I spent hours going through the settings trying to figure it out. Until I hid the first layer and from then on it worked!!

  • This is experimenting with writing, but I obviously won't use this style :


I then had an issue with writing on screen how I wanted it. I needed to zoom in to make sure that it was running smoothly but then when I zoomed out the writing was far too small and didn't fit the screen

Basic outline of text and centipede


Centipede coloured




I then put my animation into after effects to figure out how I can move the frame along to then show the antenna line growing. I created an anchor point at the end of the antenna and moved the frame to the left.

I may have to create multiple animations of the different sequences and add them all into after effects for it to flow properly; not sure this is something I need to speak to a tutor or technician about



I feel so much more confident creating my animation in Photoshop than by hand and After Effects it seems much easier for me and I am so glad that I was shown this technique it has saved me a lot of time

Syringe








Adding two animations together in after effects


Kill the bitch writing


Name of the programme


Adding veins

Leg movement

In order to get the legs to move I painted the background colour over the legs then onion-skinned the layer by changing the opacity and re-drew the legs for each frame in a different direction






Putting it all into After Effects


 http://youtu.be/OquQfRHWfEA

This animation was too fast so would need slowing down in areas however it is already at 36 seconds.
I decided to cut out some of the writing in order to give me more time to play around with the pace

http://youtu.be/3d1RCNuLr_o

FINAL DECISION ON MUSIC
Tried using creepy music box

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=47mLY8vX3L0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4bRQPCvJdmI

Chosen one
Love this one as it includes lots of other weird sounds and makes you feel like your head is going to explode when you listen

Maybe if i played it from 47 seconds where it is really intense then ends on the creepy music box dying out
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f8fUFmjqXZo

The second bit of sound I want to layer over the top is an extract from an interview with Burroughs where he says 'The damage to health is minimal' and the interviewer adds 'But it has done things to your soul?' Where Burroughs then giggles. I think this would be quite creepy alongside the music box tune and could also act as part of the documentary.

I spoke to Mike Flower (technician) who helped me adjust the volume of each sound clip and to loop the legs of the centipede so that they run longer. I also split some layers into new sections and stretched the time of them - in particular the writing so that it played long enough to be read

Final Outcome


On youtube
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hV1VTyJC-Kk&feature=youtu.be




I am pleased with the outcome of the animation because I have continued with the colour scheme of dull greens yellows browns to represent heroin, I have included initial ideas still and tried to represent the text as if it were Burroughs writing himself, with use of scribbles. This reflects what I learnt at the earlier stages about line work, dots, thicker lines and thin. I have also used motifs still from earlier in the module such as the syringe and hands.
I would have liked to add more collage to the animation and included my hand animating had i more time. If I done this again I would try create more interesting compositions and make the frame flow from one side to the other on after effects using the position tool. I am really pleased with the sounds I chose I think these reflect Burroughs well but maybe don't suit my animation as well as they would suit something a little darker. I wanted to keep it playful still with the music box and the laughing keep it light hearted. I think it works well as an advertisement for a documentary though which is what the brief asked.