Crit feedback

Feedback by Alice Dear

Comment on the evidence presented on blog:

Good investigation and research into the production/final resolution. Good combination of writing and images. Good final resolutions

Comment on the selection of evidence on the Presentation boards:

Good organised boards for briefs

Comment on the organisation and presentation of information on the presentation boards:

Good idea to organise it into a folder. Could make them more illustrative - think about colour schemes etc.

General Comments:

• Good research into where the work could stand in a professional context, could look into some more satirical artists
• You have evidenced how your work can exist in real world context on your blog. You have evidenced decision making in posts
• For your blog use ISSUU for a lot of images then you can talk about them as a whole process in a smaller blog post
• You have thought and investigated Professional context - would be good to see your FMP pieces practically e.g on a mug etc
• Good thought and evaluation about work step by step

Feedback by Will Grout


Comment on the evidence presented on blog:

This blog is not very clear. I think you need to organise it a bit. I can't see what briefs have been done
You have not labelled individual briefs i.e studio brief 12345..
ISSUU images
Blog more

Comment on the selection of evidence on the Presentation boards:

Boards are very thorough and show each project from start to finish
You need to physically submit some of the work
Label boards studio brief 1,2, etc to correlate to blog

Comment on the organisation and presentation of information on the presentation boards:

Clear and concise

General Comments :

Label blog studio brief 1 etc... 

Have boards in a portfolio labelled with studio brief

Have a plastic wallet of 1 final image for each brief to support it

I think a lot of these comments are what I already know I need to do i.e sorting out my blog and printing out final designs but some of them I think are a good idea such as putting studio brief numbers on my boards to make them easier to understand and some comments Alice made about looking at more artists.
I feel I wasn't as prepared for this crit as I have been in previous modules because I was yet to print any of my products and I felt that everything appeared flat compared to everyone elses work. However for hand in I know I will be ready and feel better about it seeing final finished outcomes.